This draft shows slow improvement in looking more and more like a music magazines I have added some the little but necessary things a magazine article needs such as page numbers and issue dates. Since my last draft I have also changed fonts and pictures that it looks more like an official magazine.
Ok Amy.
ReplyDeletewww: image is well posed and the headline is well positioned. I like the design of the standfirst.
ebi: more work on your columns and the enlarged quote needs to be redesigned.
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